I was looking for something like that for a long time... I love these "acidic" sounds. As for mr it's perfectly balanced, there are hard moments and softer too. And then... I lost words. Nice job, bastard. Keep it up.
I know this is your first song. I didn't do any better for my first too, so I'll tell you the truth. There is nothing which would attract listeners, because it is too repetitive. Same beat goes with the same bass pattern whole time, and then kicks are a little too quiet. I think you should make it more diverse. There is no much of additional sounds too, only some toms and ride. Hopefuly this addition exist. Try to play with some synths, pianos, plucks, strings or anything which would add some vibe.
I hope it would help you with your next creation, or you could remade this one and resubmit it.
ty for input
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